Talk:The Power of Now
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[edit] Did some copy-editing
I haven't really read the book (my mom recommended it to me, is all), but I think my copy edits have reduced ambiguity. OTOH, having not read it, I may have mis-represented some things, although I doubt this (mostly I fixed paras, not content within). I didn't remove redundant "Tolle"s or "The book"s, however, since I'm not aware whether a sentence is contingent on the one before it or on the book generally. That can be fixed by a reader. Xavexgoem (talk) 22:54, 9 March 2008 (UTC)

