Talk:The George Foundation

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[edit] Non-neutral

This reads like a brochure. Should be edited for neutrality...—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 203.200.51.1 (talk)

I agree and I'm taking a stab at editing the content that's there. I think we may need to be more drastic though - I suggest a much briefer summary of the programs, only going into detail where independent, third party sources can be found to provide verifiability and indicate the significance of a particular activity or result. This would be a drastic change - so I thought I'd put it up for feedback before having a go. -- SiobhanHansa 17:45, 5 August 2007 (UTC)

[edit] images

I replaced the lead image with one of the foundation's logo - it's fairly typical on our articles to include the logo at the top and I believe in this case it's a better image because the current one image:Amgandkids.JPG is more about George (who has his own article) than the Foundation. But my change was reverted so I thought I'd ask here for other input. -- SiobhanHansa 03:16, 7 August 2007 (UTC)

Since there were no responses about why another image would be better I've replaced the logo image. If you have other opinions on the best images for this article please voice them here. -- SiobhanHansa 12:32, 13 August 2007 (UTC)