Talk:The Big Picture (production company)

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Hi, I'm the author of this article. While I'm not at all surprised it got flagged, I would like to know what I can do to improve it and potentially make it "encyclopedia-safe.

I've read other articles out there for production companies.

example 1: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frozen_Pictures example 2: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Southern_Television

What do these articles have that this article lacks? How would I make this article more compatible to Wikipedia?Jgowdey (talk) 03:47, 7 February 2008 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for responding. Since you're willing to improve the article I've removed the speedy deletion request. The main issue I see is neutrality - some parts of the article read like an advertisement and would not be considered neutral or unbiased. With some attention to this, and improvements to the article's structure and prose in general, the article will be up to the required standards. Wexcan (talk) 04:35, 7 February 2008 (UTC)

Thank you for your input. I'm assuming the beginning parts of the article in particular read like an advertisement. I tried to fix it up a bit, but I'm still having a little difficulty with the wording. If you have any edits or suggestions as to specific parts, I'd like to know. Thanks! Jgowdey (talk) 03:47, 7 February 2008 (UTC)