Talk:Tauranga Campaign

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[edit] Grammar and sources

This article desperately needs sources and the writing in its body is largely conjectural, unencyclopaedic and just plain bad. Since it includes bizarre sentences like "What happened?" I would surmise that it was copied from some other website or book and therefore might be a copyright violation, but I have no evidence to back that claim up. I've edited parts of the Gate Pa section, but since most of that section contains conjecture about who thought what and where the British likely dropped their bombs, the entire thing would need a rewrite or otherwise very careful editing. I'll try to salvage what I can in that section, but I would encourage others to check my work and rewrite the other sections. Cumulus Clouds 21:50, 21 June 2007 (UTC)