Talk:Sure Start

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[edit] Use of words?

Is "transmogrified" a suitably encycopidic choice of words? It seems excessive to me. --81.107.202.80 15:01, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

I have now (a) logged in and (b) changed it anyway. I've aimed for greater readability and have reduced redundant words in places. While I was at it I also added a quote and some more references and corrected a foolish error that I had made some time ago. --Lord Matt 15:34, 2 November 2007 (UTC)