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An individual covered by or significantly related to this article, Steven Cravis, has edited Wikipedia as Stevencravis (talk · contribs)

An individual covered by or significantly related to this article, Steven Cravis, has edited Wikipedia as 208.121.85.251 (talk · contribs)

[edit] To the administrators

Please do not delete this, the automated warning to me that it may be copyright infringement, is referenced to my own site and my own written content which I give myself permission to repeat here, however I do also intend to try to update the info to be more unique to only this wikipedia page.

Please let me know if you have any questions or need anything at relax@stevencravis.com Thanks for your help. I'm brand new at using wikipedia.

-Steven Cravis

[edit] Notes

So far, this article fails WP:Music, WP:RS, WP:V, Autobiography, Conflict of Interest, Neutral Point of View, and reads like an advertisement which Wikipedia is not, (see WP:NOT, particularly WP:NOT#SOAP in that Wikipedia is not a Soapbox for self-promotion. Please help to improve this article by removing spam links, and introducing reliable verifiable third-party published sources (i.e. not self-published). I will be happy to help edit your article, but I need more to go by, otherwise this article is will be seriously considered for deletion. You can reach me on my talk page if you have any questions. Cricket02 (talk) 19:28, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

I'm right there with you. I suspect that with some effort, enough sources might be compiled to support WP:MUSIC, but I'm not going to go looking. What I can do is copyediting, though, and I made a rough pass at cleaning up the obvious problems.

Anything else is someone else's problem opportunity. --adavidw 21:26, 5 February 2007 (UTC)

I've done my best to clean up the obvious grammatical errors but I feel that it is a bit difficult to change the voice of the article. It sounds a bit like an advertisement and yet it provides factual information. I think someone should provide more information and make the article sound more factual. -Sage Jim (I did the best I could)