User talk:Squeejay07
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I appreciate you adding sourced information to Mike Huckabee. I feel that the information would be much better placed on the article concerning his presidential campaign. Remember, he has had many campaign contributors for his five statewide runs which aren't listed here. (And The Tyson brothers undoubtedly contributed much to those runs). The campaign page is here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mike_Huckabee_presidential_campaign%2C_2008
YOU NEED TO POST YOUR EDITS SQUEEJAY07! Mcwabaunsee 23:55, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
MANY OF YOUR CONTRIBUTIONS NEED SOURCES! Mcwabaunsee 23:55, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] Guiliani
Keep in mind the form of wikipedia; remember to use language appropriate to an encyclopedia. Mcwabaunsee 23:55, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Biden
Your contribution here is almost entirely a single quote. Can this information be summarized? Mcwabaunsee 23:55, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Huckabee
One shouldn't "assume" anything in an encyclopedia article. Who are these donors connected to? Mcwabaunsee 23:55, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Obama
These finnacial sections are started to sound too formulaic. The ranking of investors about whom we know nothing isn't useful information. This information needs to be plugged into a purpose. Mcwabaunsee 23:55, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Ralph Reed, et al
While the wording needs to be cleaned up, other careless errors need to be amended (the irregular use of "$"), this is a good section. Mcwabaunsee 23:55, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
