Talk:Society of Saint Vincent de Paul
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[edit] NPOV
I did some work on this, but it still needs major NPOV improvements. It sounds like it was written by the organization itself, to pronounce their greatness. There's a lot of unncessary information which serves to puff them up as well. It's not apporpriate to include parenthetical statements about each person and organization in order to make them sound better; it's only apporpriate for clarification, such as in the case of a fandom-specific term or difficult scientific term. I've removed some of it to improve the neutrality of this article, but it still needs attention. Not to mention that none of this is cited TheBilly (talk) 21:12, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
