Talk:Shvetashvatara Upanishad

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This article lacks good formatting, I'm not so good at formatting and also I have less time, can anybody help in this regard? any help is appreciated.


Lokesh 2000 12:18, 24 January 2006 (UTC)

I've cleaned up a few formatting things but I'll try to do more. I'm not an expert in this area by any means, but the writing seems very esoteric - I would suggest trying to simplify the language so that people unfamiliar with Upanishads may be able to understand it. Also, I think removing "we" would help give this a more NPOV. Bellemichelle 12:56, 22 September 2006 (UTC)