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[edit] History of gay square dancing
- 1976 - Miami
- 1979 - Miami Mustangs club formation
- National Gay Rodeo
- 1982 - Reno, NV
- Feb 1983 - Miami fly-in
- 1984 - Seattle first convention of National Association of Gay Square Dance Clubs
- Name change to reflect Canadian clubs
- First ten years explosion
- Non-North American Clubs: Australia, Japan, Denmark
