Talk:Shahnawaz Tanai
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Reviewed as requested on User_talk:Kelly Martin. I can't check neutrality of material, but english and phrasing, yes:
- Removed "was a dubious character" from introduction, until you find a citation (a source that called him "dubious" and why)
- "Joining hands with" ... better english is---> "working with", "joining forces with", "collaborating with"
- "Fundamentalists such as..." Can you find a different term, such as "Members of the left/right/religious party X such as" ..... describe not label?
- Added wiki-links for major names. The articles may be written some day.
It looks a very good article. Hope the review helps! FT2 17:25, 24 November 2005 (UTC)

