Talk:Shōtōkai

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The article reads like an essay rather than an encyclopedia entry. Also the number of links is too high - they should offer extra info rather than just pointing to sites. 2 or 3 is a good number.Peter Rehse 02:58, 20 October 2006 (UTC)

I propose to merge this page and the KDS page; they have material in common. I think the discussion of the style is relevant, but perhaps it should be introduced by a more formal and short definition of the word. This would make the article more like an encyclopedia entry. Ludovic Brenta 23:23, 30 November 2006 (UTC)