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Okay, I know pretty much nil about chicken care. I came here clicking through the Random Articles link, looking for articles to improve. That said, all this referencing to an "I" reads like some sort of POV... since I don't really know enough to fix it, I have marked the article with NPOV and Expert tags. --Sparky Lurkdragon 21:58, 30 December 2005 (UTC)

Removed all the POV stuff.

Looks much better now. Thanks. :)

Just a reminder, but it helps keep conversations clearer when you sign your name on talk pages. You can either click the signature button, or just type four tidles (~~~~). Thanks! --Sparky Lurkdragon 07:30, 20 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] 66.82.9.xx

I think perhaps some discussion is in order, 66.82.9.xx. I ask that you please stop reverting the article to its POV state. See, all these references to "I" and saying things like "that's what makes them so fun!" and so on are quite clearly pushing a point of view - something that is not allowed on Wikipedia. The Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a how-to guide - for that, I recommend its sister project, Wikibooks. This page should not take any stance on how neat these chickens are or the details on their care, merely describe what they are and the basics of their care.

I ask that you please review the guidelines and rules for editing here at Wikipedia, and please take the message at the bottom of the edit screen that your work will be edited mercilessly to heart. --Sparky Lurkdragon 02:52, 23 January 2006 (UTC)

I'd say it is best left as is, and if changes are to be made, they will be made by someone more knowledgeable. I will clean it up some, but this article has been here a LONG time.

Thank you for understanding and cleaning it up a bit.  :)

Also, I may not know anything much about chicken breeding, but I do about formatting and tone for the Wikipedia, so I'll fix up a few tone problems ('you', mainly), standarize the formatting a bit, and add some wikilinks. I'm also a bit confused about what is meant by "Class A" and "Class B" - some sort of size measurement, I'm guessing? - and I think the article could do with some sort of short explanation so the layperson can understand that better. --Sparky Lurkdragon 06:10, 23 January 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Chickenbreed Infobox

A new infobox {{Infobox Chickenbreed}} has been created for chicken articles. If you see anywhere it needs improved please contact User:Stepshep. If it meets your criteria it is requested you add it to this article's page for standardization. Thanks! §hep • ¡Talk to me! 17:06, 1 June 2008 (UTC)