Talk:Serafin (band)

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This article is not bad, but could use some wikifying and general cleanup to move from a newspaper-type piece to a newspaper article, such as a complete album list, external links, etc.--Marysunshine 17:55, 8 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Cleanup

I've started doing some work on this page basing it on the *German Wikipedia Entry but with a bit more history, a discography, and something about the members' history. I've left chunks from the original article and formatted it a little so it's easier to read. I'm fairly new to editing articles, but think this one could benefit from some input Let me know what you think --Stonysleep 19:34, 27 July 2006 (UTC)

It's definitely not a great article, but the one thing that most stands out to me is the line "They sold the most records in France on Naive Records, 24000 or so." Not only is it not cited, but "24(,)000 or so?" That's pretty awful - Mbruno42 04:46, 3 October 2007 (UTC)