Talk:Securitas AB

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[edit] Layout and Style

(cur) (last) 20:43, 3 March 2007 AVX (Talk | contribs) (→added clean-up tag. This article is poorly written and organised.)

Look, instead of just adding a tag, and commenting like that, why don't you instead show me how to organize this properly, me being a "newbie" at this, or adding to it yourself? I made an effort at least, and you should take a gander at what it looked like before... :)

Murdockh 10:46, 6 March 2007 (UTC)

Sorry about that. Don't think I'm criticizing you or anything. I just haven't had the time to look over it. By adding the clean-up tag it alerts others to come take a look at it and clean up if they can. In fact I'm off to work as soon as I finish this comment so I can't take a look at it now even :P. I might some time later or tomorrow. I just noticed some things are in wrong sections and stuff, nothing more really. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by AVX (talk • contribs) 22:38, 6 March 2007 (UTC).

Don't worry about that, I expect to receive criticism, being new at this - I just got a bit flustered, because I want the articles I work on to look good and be correct. I need tips!! ;) Murdockh 14:30, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Reads like a pitch for business

This part of the article reads like a commercial advertisement:

The foundation of Securitas's business has been, and still is, based on what clients need - Integrity, Vigilance, and Helpfulness. These are the company's values...

Wikipedia policy: What_Wikipedia_is_not#Wikipedia_is_not_a_soapbox

Advertising. Articles about companies and products are acceptable if they are written in an objective and unbiased style.

The noted language needs to be either neutralized, or removed. Richard Myers 01:23, 22 March 2007 (UTC)

*Well, I've changed that line. See if it's better worded now. Murdockh 13:32, 23 March 2007 (UTC)