Talk:Scripture Union

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[edit] Cleanup of Origins

There's quite a lot that needs to be done here. As it currently is, it's badly formatted. If it written as one piece it would be much better. Secondly, it's not been written from a neutral point of view. "It was also so lively, so informal and so very different from the boring sermons they had sat through at the dry-as-dust Sunday Schools they attended normally" is a very clear opinion. Lastly, it contains too much information than is useful or necessary. We don't really need to know all the specifics about the international politics of SU, for example. I don't feel well qualified to do this, so if someone else is knowledgeable about SU there help would be very much appreciated. FlamingGoldFish 17:53, 12 June 2007 (UTC)

[edit] I can help

Hi, i think i can help clean this page up i know a fair bit about the history of Scripture Union. I've never edited wiki before so i'm a bit of a novice.

I gather you want: 1. All the dot points on SU's orgins to be merged into one section. 2. The section to be written from a neutral point of view. 3. The not so interesting details about SU's international politics removed.

Let me know if there's anything else and in a day or two i'll have a go at it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mynameistrav (talk • contribs) 00:39, 3 September 2007 (UTC)

[edit] I've had a go here

I've tried to condense the article and remove some bias, it is now less than a third of it's initial length. If you still think this is too long, replace the NPOV flag on it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 195.137.75.44 (talk) 16:33, 7 January 2008 (UTC)