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I've finally found some time as some other editors have been adding unsourced stuff into the original article. You've made a great start. Have you got Gallo's book, there's a lot of useful info in there, and can be referenced, but my copy is not to hand? Also, re the "Live Introduction", (a) there's a confusion between "Michael" & "Henry" (Musical Box?) and (b) Could we live without the Collins version, merely mentioning it? Reason for this is that to quote it all verbatim is risky from a copyright angle. I think we might get away with the whole of Gabriel's intro because it makes no sense not to have it all, but if we can source a reference to Collins' and just say it was similar, but raunchier, I feel that would be better. There are also places where the wording could be tighter, and I'll get round to those when it's not 3:29 am! Regards --Rodhullandemu (Talk) 03:29, 5 January 2008 (UTC)