Talk:Sandra Morgan
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
[edit] Good article review
Once again, this is an another well-crafted article. Rather than list a series of suggestions I have taken the liberty of making some stylistic changes. The article meets the Good Article criteria, being well written and referenced, although a freely licensed image would be a wonderful addition if one could be found. Before I can list this as GA I have some items that I feel need addressing:
- "This feat, at the age of 14 years and 6 months, made her the youngest Australian to have won an Olympic gold medal" Is she still?
- "The selection of Leech and Crapp generated controversy..." Should this be Leech and Morgan?
- "...as they were the youngest swimmers and lacked experience at open level swimming" Does this mean youngest swimmers in this event at this Olympics, for Australia, for Australia ever? Please clarify.
- "...she stood at 170 cm and weighed 170 cm" You need to add her weight rather than her height.
- The abbreviation "NSW" needs adding at the first mention of New South Wales.
The article will remain on hold until 23 February 2008 to allow you time to address these points. Please let me know when you would like me to take another look. Once again, great work. -- Mattinbgn\talk 12:15, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
- I think, it's ready. Blnguyen (bananabucket) 03:04, 18 February 2008 (UTC)
Categories: Wikipedia good articles | Wikipedia CD Selection-GAs | GA-Class Good articles | Uncategorized good articles | Wikipedia Did you know articles | Biography articles with listas parameter | Biography articles of living people | Sports and games work group articles | GA-Class biography (sports and games) articles | Mid-priority biography (sports and games) articles | GA-Class biography articles | WikiProject Australian sports articles | GA-Class Australian sports articles | Unknown-importance Australian sports articles | GA-Class Australia articles | Mid-importance Australia articles

