Talk:San Jose Flea Market

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[edit] Rudolf2007's review

Overall this is an impressive and enjoyable start. It has potential to become a feature article.

Research and references are great. But you should footnote as many facts as possible. Here's the drill:

I or some other editor will have to check to make sure that sources are paraphrased rather than quoted.

Writing in general is vivid, polished and appropriate for encyclopedia neutral point of view.

Headings--Neither Family nor Flea Market Content tell us what the section is about.

Setbacks should appear in chronological order.

there is the noise of constant music playing--how about "sound" instead of noise.

I'll need to give this a closer reading when you've made these changes.

Rudolph2007 (talk) 02:32, 25 February 2008 (UTC)