Talk:Run-on sentence

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That's a comma splice, not a run-on sentence. Chuck 19:12, 15 December 2005 (UTC)

Cool, but where'd you find this? Fix it yourself, or tell us so we can harass the author fix it ourselves. --M1ss1ontomars2k4 | T | C | @ 02:11, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

Someone else had added it to this article as an example of a run-on sentence. I removed it, since it's not a run-on sentence, but moved it here so I could explain why I was removing it. My explanation for the change lacks context without the deleted sentence itself. Chuck 18:52, 19 May 2006 (UTC)

Comma splices are a form (the most common form, in fact) -- that is, a subset -- of run-on sentences. To separate them as totally distinct is incorrect: The term "comma splice" simply makes the KIND of run-on more precise. But grammarians teach from the very early grades of elementary school that a comma splice is a run-on setence. In fact, I doubt if many students anywhere know what a comma splice is, but they have all been taught what a run-on is (with the comma). Softlavender (talk) 07:03, 21 January 2008 (UTC)

Some grammarians teach this, while others define run-on sentence to exclude comma splices. Chuck (talk) 21:50, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Removed text

I took the run-on sentence out of the intro paragraph. I'm sure it's meant to be witty and all, but this is an encyclopedia and we have to maintain some kind proper level of writing. Moreover, that kind of thing is typically used *verbally* by grammar teachers. It is more effective that way because they can just keep talking and talking until the pupils "get" that the sentence is running too long. Here, it just falls flat. There's been a bit of back-and-forth with this kind of thing, with huge run-on sentences getting trimmed, then getting replaced, etc. I hope we can avoid that kind of thing in the future. Matt Deres 20:08, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Also

isn't a runon sentence also when you put in multiple conjunctions without commas? "We're going to the store and eating pies and getting rich thereby" or something.

No. I would only classify that sentence as awkward or inelegant, not as a run-on. Matt Deres (talk) 13:32, 21 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Heads out of ***es

What the hell does this mean? How un-Wikipedian do we want this article to be?

"A properly constructed sentence can be extended almost indefinitely. However, writing such an extended sentence is poor writing style and should be avoided."

How is that? Erroneous. Bullshit, really. Aside from lacking citation, they give no context at all, and they seem not to understand rhetoric at all, its power and usage in virtually every aspect of communication.