Talk:Rocketdyne

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[edit] Last Paragraph

I'm new at this, but the bottom paragraph of this article reads like a newspaper editorial and should by cleaned up with more neutral language. The citations are also in the paragraph instead of cited at the bottom. Basically, someone should check this out... BorisLobb 19:18, 28 October 2006 (UTC)

I've cleaned up the blatant POV in the segment in question. Comments are much appreciated. Sincerely, Nick L. 18:32, 4 November 2006 (UTC)

Looks good! BorisLobb 18:13, 8 November 2006 (UTC)