Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Trey Stone Appeal/Evidence
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[edit] Evidence presented by {Trey Stone}
[edit] Beginning of collaboration with 172
Me and 172 agreed to put aside our past disputes [2] and collaborate on edits after I removed a 3RR post that mistakenly claimed he had violated the rule. [3] After that, I asked for his advice on major future edits I made.
[edit] Future edits, end of politically-based arguments
The three articles I tried to rewrite in a major way were Henry Kissinger, Iran-Contra affair, and Communist state. On the Kissinger page, I made a draft of a rewrite; Jmabel agreed to implement my intro changes, [4] and 172 editted in the other changes [5], commenting here. I felt my rewrite and 172's approval reflected not only a removal of bias within the article, but also a clearer organization and wording. I was careful not to let my own political views influence my changes. At the time, I had a temporary ArbCom injunction, so I was unable to directly edit the page.
Before my injunction, I had tried to rewrite the Iran-Contra Affair page as well. [6] I got 172's advice on this as well; he mostly approved of the edits [7] though gave me some minor suggestions as well. Once again, my focus was more on organization and relevancy than the political bias I had mostly been concerned with when I first started editting.
The other article I remember copyeditting before my ban was Communist state. Here the article was just bloated with too much back and forth opinion; "the anti-communists say this, the pro-communists say that." I tried to cut down on that and stick to the facts of what had historically occurred within Communist states, the technical definition of the term, and removing redundant wording. [8] Here again 172 approved of my changes, though added that the article still needed some work. Ultramarine objected to some of my changes and I explained my rationale on the talk page.
I know that's only three articles, but they were major changes I'm happy I made, particularly to the Henry Kissinger article. I made sure to ask for 172's advice on my changes and see what he thought so we had a kind of "bipartisan" consensus. Should I go back to editting political articles, I'll make sure not to engage in the heated disputes and rhetoric I did before, and ground my changes in articles not just in NPOVing but also improving organization and wording. I feel like I've definitely learned a lot since I first started contributing here about how this site works, and won't repeat my past mistakes.
Sorry for taking so long to post this, and if I messed up on format or need to add more evidence just let me know. Thanks to the ArbCom for taking up this case. Dr. Trey 09:28, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Evidence presented by {your user name}
[edit] First assertion
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[edit] Second assertion
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[edit] Evidence presented by {your user name}
[edit] First assertion
Place argument and diffs which support your assertion, for example, your first assertion might be "So-and-so engages in edit warring". Here you would list specific edits to specific articles which show So-and-so engaging in edit warring
[edit] Second assertion
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