Talk:Remo Fernandes/Comments

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Assesement: 11:11, 1 March 2008 Kensplanet. Rated B-class and Low importance.

Contents 1 Lead In 2 Early years and musical influences 3 Pre-fame years 4 Career 5 Other collaborations and work 6 Personal life 7 Song Samples

[edit] Lead In

• Remo Fernandes (born 8 May 1953)is a popular pop/rock/Indian fusion artist and playback singer from the state of Goa, India.
  pop/rock/Indian fusion artist and playback singer---Please provide a web reference fo this. Also seperate (born 8 May 1953) and is,
• He now writes and sings his songs in five different languages, English, Hindi, French, Portuguese, and Konkani.
  should be He now writes and sings his songs in five different languages, English, Hindi, French, Portuguese and Konkani.
• Lead In is almost nearly perfect for a 14KB Page.

[edit] Early years and musical influences

Well done. This section looks perfect.

[edit] Pre-fame years

Ok. Fine section

[edit] Career

You must split this into sections. For example, you must have an individual section named His first hit album "Pack That Smack" and write as much as details U can. Similarly, for other famous albums.

[edit] Other collaborations and work

Quite good although not perfect. You can get more on the Net.

[edit] Personal life

You should expand this.

[edit] Song Samples

You should put the .ogg file in the carrier section. This section is unnecessary.

Where is the Awards section?????? Refer Madonna (entertainer) article since it is a A-class singer article.

I also recommend a Peer review on this article. Message me if you have doubts or not satisfied.