Talk:Remix (STAR One)

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Very interesting, but the English could do with refining for an international audience:

e.g.

In its first year itself it had created a rage among teens

'rage' is not a standard use of the word, and could confuse someone not used to Indian English, or not advanced in standard English. Not so important, but 'it had created' is not a standard use of 'had' for the past tense. Perhaps 'it created' is what was meant? Centrepull (talk) 07:59, 23 February 2008 (UTC)

I have deleted unnecessary, and a rather long, piece from this article (no one would have time to read profiles of every single character, primary or secondary)--Maurice45 (talk) 14:27, 4 May 2008 (UTC)