Talk:Rembrandt Peale

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[edit] Messy POV

I did a little work today in trying to make this a lot more encyclopedic but it's thriving with original research and a massive lack of neutrality. I'm not particularly invested in this but I hope someone can jump in and continue. --Midnightdreary (talk) 13:59, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Okay, more specific commentary... the sections (now subsections) make no sense, and the prose is disjointed and out of order. Using images as a reference is unacceptable; footnotes should be to commentary on Peale's paintings, not the paintings themselves (otherwise it's original research, which we don't do here). After reading this article, I think this guy must have been some kind of deity descended from heaven itself. The gallery might be too much too; a link to Commons might suffice. --Midnightdreary (talk) 14:03, 15 April 2008 (UTC)