Talk:Ravella Nayaks

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[edit] Problems

Aside from the grammar, style, and tone (all of which need work) and the wikification (unwikified lead, etc.), the article is couched in very one-sided language; it makes very dogmatic statements about events with no sign that there might be alternative interpretations and views. --Mel Etitis (Talk) 22:19, 19 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Editing

I edited the whole article, added citations and improved the language.Kumarrao 18:23, 28 June 2007 (UTC)