Talk:RAF Fighter Command

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"The aerial bombing of German cities with a civilian death toll of several hundreds of thousands remains a controversial topic, most prominently with regards to the bombing of Dresden that some see as a war crime or a crime against humanity." What has this to do with Fighter Command??? I suggest delete this sentence. GrahamBould 11:05, 7 April 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Citations Needed

The section Winning air superiority over the Luftwaffe contains quite a lot of operational details which may not be appropriate in an overview article such as this.

In particular, several sets of figures are given for aircraft losses which suggest that RAF claims at the time were wildly inaccurate. In order to comply with wikipedia policies, I think it is absolutely essential that in-line citations are given quoting the sources for both the contemporary claims and the subsequent analysis. The figures quoted seem to me to be rather one-sided. Without detailed sources to substantiate the figures, it is difficult to claim WP:NPOV on this article. --Romney yw (talk) 14:15, 20 February 2008 (UTC)