Talk:Radola Gajda
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[edit] WP:MILHIST Assessment
A very nice start, but I think the intro could use some work. "Radola Gajda was a Czech military commander and politician who...?" What is his significance? What, for that matter is his context? Perhaps "... who fought in both World Wars before turning to politics." Or even better, "...who fought in both World Wars and is best known for X." Fix this up, and we might be able to bump it up to B class I think. LordAmeth 09:17, 28 October 2006 (UTC)
- In continuation of the above, there is a need for more in-text citations, as well as an infobox and a picture of the man (if possible). You could also talk a bit more about his career as a politician, his policies and ideals. Some more elaboration of his military career wouldn't hurt, by elaborating on his leadership in the battles. Sniperz11talk|edits 19:27, 25 January 2008 (UTC)
Categories: Biography articles without listas parameter | B-Class biography articles | Military history articles with incomplete B-Class checklists | Balkan military history task force articles | World War II task force articles | Start-Class military history articles | Military history articles needing attention to referencing and citation | Military history articles needing attention to supporting materials

