Talk:Rad Racer
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Criscih: Please do not write over my edits to the text without motivation. The intro text is still very POV, and the images should not all be at the bottom of the article like they are now.
If you place a note here when you're "finished" with the article, I can take it upon myself to do some NPOV cleanup. I don't want to risk that you overwrite the work again.
Even though you somewhat addressed the points I brought up on your user page, the rest of the text is still not neutral ("awesome music", for example), and the text still reads as a game tutorial / instruction booklet. In an encyclopedia, one should rarely address the reader as "you".
David Remahl 17:42, 11 Aug 2004 (UTC)
[edit] comment concerning 3-d glasses
I own the game the NES and a pair of the original packaged 3D glasses and have found them to be more of a gimmick than an actual 3D component to the game, I have editted the article accordingly. Drfool 23:57, 5 September 2007 (UTC)

