User talk:Rachelisamazingg

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  1. It's unusual for genuine encyclopaedia articles to give addresses and phone numbers
  2. The first bit of info given is that the school is white, which I assume doesn't refer to the buildings, and ethnic composition is also given its own section.
  3. details of the school day are given, but nothing on the buildings, history etc
  4. OHS offers many classes to fit different students' needs. Its all puff, written like a promotional leaflet or school website. (lots more offers too
  5. Honors classes also prepare students to pass the Regents exams, but subjects are explored in more depth than in Regents classes. Honors students also have a heavier workload, but to students who want a high GPA, this extra work is worth it. Independent sources too justify these claim?
  6. the OHS girls' basketball teams have actually brought some glory' . More unsourced puff

There is the basis of a decent article here, it's a pity its written as if it's copied from a school website, Jimfbleak (talk) 06:28, 2 February 2008 (UTC)