Talk:PowerBook Duo

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[edit] Cleanup needed

This article needs a great deal of cleanup:

1. The tone is often inappropriate.
   Talking about a product including capabilities using the words "even" is a big tip-off.
2. Reasons are uncited, and thus speculation.
   "Because of its small size..." Unless this is cited, it's speculation.
3. Duplicate links.
   There's several links in the Processor section that lead to the same article. I can understand how this happened, but it still should be fixed.

That's it for now. --Steven Fisher 21:56, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

[edit] merge Apple PenLite?

• Merge since this prototype is essentially a Duo with a tablet/stylus interface. ⇔ ChristTrekker 17:23, 20 August 2007 (UTC)