Talk:Porsche Cayenne

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Contents 1 Advertisement? 2 Cleaned up 3 Copyright Violations on this page 4 Advertising Tone

[edit] Advertisement?

Several sections of this article are written as though they were an advertisement (i'm not sure how to put up the box saying so), most notably the silly "performance" section. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.88.97.52 (talk) 19:55, 6 March 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Cleaned up

The "Controversy" section was an unsourced, POV soapbox. The points made are trivial and opinionated. The opinion blurbs are unreferenced. The "Popular Culture" also was deleted. The use of cars in movies and by celebrities is so trivial that it's a waste of space. J M Rice (talk) 03:24, 27 January 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Copyright Violations on this page

The Cayenne Turbo text quoted below is copied by user Autostream from Edmunds.com without citation.

Atop the range sits the Cayenne Turbo. Apart from the two turbochargers (one per bank) and a lowered compression ratio of 10.5:1, the 4.8-liter V8 is similar to that of the Cayenne S except for an output of 500 hp (370 kW) and 516 ft·lbf (700 N·m) of torque. Porsche's height-adjustable air suspension and PASM adaptive damping are standard, along with fancier instruments, bigger brakes, bigger wheels, navigation/communication system, Servotronic steering, 12-channel parking radar, and a center locking differential w/optional rear locker. http://www.edmunds.com/insideline/do/Drives/FirstDrives/articleId=119520 —Preceding

Several other sections added by this user appear to be from the same Edmunds article.

unsigned comment added by Springee (talk • contribs) 01:32, 5 April 2008 (UTC)

I have removed the copy-paste section due to copyright concerns. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Springee (talk • contribs) 14:21, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

[edit] Advertising Tone

The article lacks impartiality, from start to finish. Much of the writing seems highly biased in favor of the vehicle, and much of the writing seems conjectural. The tone of the article is completely off-base for a reference article. Notably, the article completely avoids the very real co-development of the Cayenne with the VW Taureg. 842U (talk) 04:26, 13 April 2008 (UTC)