Talk:Peter Panton

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At present this reads very much like a family vanity piece and I think it could easily attract attention for deletion for non-noteability. Can the authors state what this man actually does? What books has he written? Why are these of any significance? Loosing unencyclopedic fluufery like "umpteen" and "prestigious" would help and possibly the who's who about the family could be trimmed, (my personal reaction on reading it was it had the name cringe inducing name dropping and status puffery of a Lee Iacocoa autobiography). Winstonwolfe (talk) 16:00, 15 May 2008 (UTC)