Wikipedia talk:Peer review/Powderfinger/archive1

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[edit] "Done" items

  • "...entered the mainstream..." in lead, unclear what constitutes mainstream, one man's indie is another man's middle-the-road trash - i.e., it's is a bit POV. Y Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
  • "Many of Powderfinger's albums reached..." - "Many of Powderfinger's albums have reached..."? Y Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
  • "...which achieved highly..." - yuck. Y Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
  • "...predominantly rock, though ranged from soft, bluesy-rock to hard-rock...." - citation for this or is this your own opinion? Y Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
  • Numbers nine or below should be written out. 10 or more as numbers. Y Done 09:37, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
  • Order citations numerically, so [29][25] would be better as [25][29]. Y Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)
  • "The group has also topped the Triple J Hottest 100 chart twice with nineteen entries in the list in total." - needs citation. Y Done 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Pending

  • "...he decided to dedicate the time towards starting a family..." - citation or this is WP:OR.
    Still tracking sources. ~ Sebi 07:08, 3 November 2007 (UTC)
    Poo. I found nothing so far. Linca, any ideas? — H2O —  08:31, 3 November 2007 (UTC)