Wikipedia:Peer review/Spider Wars/archive1

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[edit] Spider Wars

What I hope to get out of this review are ways to improve upon wording, phrasing and just and overall opinion on where this article is at the moment. Some suggestions regarding the pictures would be nice as well. --Spikeleefan 21:56, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

• Sorry to have to be so negative, but... this article is in effect one long plot summary, which is not recommended per Wikipedia:Notability (fiction). It's also nearly devoid of references and has very little detail on real world factors such as production costs, where the cells were painted, the producer and editor, &c. The trivia should be folded into the article or eliminated, per Wikipedia:Avoid trivia sections in articles. — RJH (talk) 22:33, 19 June 2007 (UTC)