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Good work on the Bupropion page.--Nuklear 09:03, 10 June 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Radafaxine
I put my best reference into the Radafaxine page itself. I found four or five places where a GSK quarterly report from 2006 was reported second hand, but I was unable to find the GSK report itself, so I got lazy and didn't put my mediocre reference into the bupropion page itself, figuring someone closer to the industry could do better. MaxEnt 00:40, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
- With some effort, I was able to determine that Radafaxine corresponds to GSK pipeline candidate 353162.
- scooped from Google cache
- SGK Feb 2007 product pipeline -- 353162 nowhere to be found
- pipeline 2004 -- 353162 slated for 2006
- Apparently, GSK practices unmarked burial of their stillborn creations. MaxEnt 01:21, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
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- Found a more permanent association of 353162 to Radafaxine.
- MaxEnt 01:47, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
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- Check out my change to Radafaxine lead paragraph. MaxEnt 01:54, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] References, nbsps, endashes
Hi Paul. First of all, let me thank you for the excellent work you've been doing :) Now, for your questions—Diberri's template builder is the best tool there is at the moment. It used to produce abbreviated journal names, which I prefer, but doesn't anymore, as it simply gathers information directly from PubMed and formats it; something must have changed regarding output from the PubMed system. I wouldn't know about that, although the man himself probably does. When I add references, I change the hyphens into en dashes directly in the template builder; I altered my keyboard layout for easy dash input long ago, so that makes it faster :) I don't think there is any tool to automatically add non-breaking spaces where needed. The best thing to do, if a stretch for most contributors, is to read up on WP:MOSNUM and try to incorporate it into your editing practices.
wikEd, by Cacycle (talk · contribs), is an almost-WYSIWIG editor which can be added to your monobook. I've never really gotten used to it, but many, many contributors use it regularly. A list of all the features can be found here. Sorry, but you did mean editors as in software, right? If you meant people who edit, that's another story!
As for "less clean-up work for you to do", please don't worry about that! This sort of thing (reference formatting, dashes, spaces, etc.) is hardly any trouble at all, at least to me; as a matter of fact, if there's anything else I can do for you please let me know. Best wishes, Fvasconcellos (t·c) 20:04, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- By the way, I can't really see a significant difference here; had any inaccuracy been introduced? Fvasconcellos (t·c) 20:34, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- OK; take it easy :) I'd personally write "an MAOI" but I guess that's a difference of opinion. As for any inaccuracies due to the copy editing, please go ahead and fix them, but bear in mind that they were introduced as a good faith effort to make the article more accessible to lay readers. Sorry to insist upon this, but just a friendly note—edit summaries such as "correcting Person's inaccuracies" may be taken the wrong way... Fvasconcellos (t·c) 20:57, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- I have to second that; it's troubling to find edit summaries and sections headings singling out another editor's good faith edits. That sort of thing shouldn't pop up on anyone's watchlist. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 21:09, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- This also bothered me... see Wikipedia:Ownership of articles, and as for the MAOI bit, A and an. Regardless of what letter a word starts with, if it's *pronounced* with a vowel sound at the beginning ("em"), it takes "an". It could be argued that the abbreviation MAOI is only written shorthand, and that in reading it out loud one would actually say "a monoamine oxidase inhibitor", but I think most people would simply read the letters out, so it would take "an". --Galaxiaad 03:43, 20 August 2007 (UTC)
- In response to your comment on my talk page: thank you. Looking at my comment now, it seems a little snippy, which is not what I intended, so I'm glad it didn't put you on the defensive. I still don't think it was necessary to mention Outriggr by name, since by nature an edit summary is kind of a parting shot. That guideline sounds like it's talking about pointing out an editor's mistake *to that editor* to let them know why you believe they're wrong. However, I appreciate your edits too; obviously bupropion would not be where it is now without you. Thank you for the respectful comment, and I hope I've done better this time. (And it never occurred to me that some people pronounce MAO as "meyo"!) --Galaxiaad 16:41, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
- Heh. Me either, for what it's worth. The article passed, by the way, and is now featured. Thank you again for your contributions. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 16:59, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
- In response to your comment on my talk page: thank you. Looking at my comment now, it seems a little snippy, which is not what I intended, so I'm glad it didn't put you on the defensive. I still don't think it was necessary to mention Outriggr by name, since by nature an edit summary is kind of a parting shot. That guideline sounds like it's talking about pointing out an editor's mistake *to that editor* to let them know why you believe they're wrong. However, I appreciate your edits too; obviously bupropion would not be where it is now without you. Thank you for the respectful comment, and I hope I've done better this time. (And it never occurred to me that some people pronounce MAO as "meyo"!) --Galaxiaad 16:41, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
- I guess I parse "MAOI" as "inhibitor". I'm sure a glance at PubMed will find more articles with titles such as this one and occurrences of this particular collocation. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 21:15, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
- OK; take it easy :) I'd personally write "an MAOI" but I guess that's a difference of opinion. As for any inaccuracies due to the copy editing, please go ahead and fix them, but bear in mind that they were introduced as a good faith effort to make the article more accessible to lay readers. Sorry to insist upon this, but just a friendly note—edit summaries such as "correcting Person's inaccuracies" may be taken the wrong way... Fvasconcellos (t·c) 20:57, 19 August 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Bupropion
Hi Paul. Here's the relevant passage, ipsis verbis:
In the absence of placebo-controlled data to confirm the attribution of tics to bupropion exposure, the use of bupropion with appropriate monitoring in children with ADHD and tics deserves consideration if other approaches have not been successful.
By the way, Mr Bungle (talk · contribs) has admirably rewritten the "Overdose" section. I hope you'll find it improved. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:02, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
- Re. dosage information: I myself don't think it would be medical advice. WP:MEDMOS, however, argues that such information can be construed as such; I can't disagree entirely. As we've both seen, what does and doesn't constitute medical advice is still to be decided :) I am divided in thinking that (1) such information might make the article more comprehensive, particularly if accompanied by relevant, sourced commentary (e.g. higher doses associated with significant increase in adverse effects) and (2) it is localized (approved dosage may vary by country), does not encompass off-label use and, again as mentioned in MEDMOS, may become the subject of vandalism and disputes. The isotretinoin article was recently the object of such a dispute, with one editor adding unsourced claims as to the efficacy of low doses.
- Perhaps I shouldn't have been so forceful with my "defense" of the overdose section, particularly as, in the end, Mr Bungle was responsible for improving it and I didn't do much :) I still think it was worth keeping, though. Why do you ask about the dosage info—would you like to add it back? Perhaps it's time we tackle this once and for all and discuss just how appropriate such information is. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 00:33, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
- I see you've gotten in touch with Colin; I was just about to do so myself and got sidetracked. I recommend we wait for his input; he's taking a short wikibreak, and if we want real consensus this time, we'd best get a second note of the main author's opinion :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:45, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Price discussion
The discussion of prices in Modafinil is unusual, but are you sure it is against guidelines? ←BenB4 11:42, 6 September 2007 (UTC)
- I guess that means you expect the price to change quickly? ←BenB4 10:42, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
If the prices are published in primary sources like catalogs, or discussed in secondary sources, that's not OR. The reason I bring this up is that every news article I've ever read about it has mentioned how expensive it is. ←BenB4 10:57, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Aspirin
Hi Paul,
I hope we can collaborate on Aspirin to make it a great article. I'm at a disadvantage to you in that I'm just a layperson with a layperson's book (and all the many flaws it contains :-). Frankly, a Ladybird book on Aspirin would satisfy WP:V but we all want to do better than that. Currently, parts of Aspirin's history are unsourced, incomplete and possibly incorrect. I could fix these issues but I'd have to cite Jeffreys as the source since it is what I've got. Perhaps you've got some better sources and the time to do that instead of me? If not, would you mind if I went ahead? If the text ends up with something you feel is incorrect, then we can discuss (I won't fight). Also, if I do this, you could replace some of my citations with better sources if they are available and match the text. Ultimately, Jeffreys doesn't cover everything and I've noted in the "History: a review" where we need to find other sources. I'd love if you could comment on my review and hopefully answer some of the questions/requests.
Cheers, Colin. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Colin (talk • contribs) 12:52, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Fluoxetine
Hi Paul. I usually reserve semi-protection for heavy vandalism (e.g. many unproductive edits a day) or articles where vandalism isn't being reverted quickly enough. The past few vandal edits to fluoxetine were reverted almost immediately, except for this one, which was also the only truly "dangerous" edit (introducing a hard-to-spot factual inaccuracy). I really don't think protection is necessary at the time. If you do think it's warranted, please feel free to leave a note at WP:RFPP, and another admin will review it—I may of course be wrong :) Hope you're doing well, Fvasconcellos (t·c) 23:53, 25 October 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Genotoxic TCA
Hi Paul, You reverted my comments about the genotoxity of TCAs, and said that the srudy was disproven. I looked up the study you talked about. I diod not know this study, so thank you very much. It was very interesting. But to my mind the genotoxity of TCA in Drosophila Melanogaster has not been disproven in this study. The TCAs mentioned are still proven to be genotosic in Drosophila Melanogaster, but it seems that this study found no link between genotoxic TCAs and breast cancer. Thats good news to my mind... but i think it still should be mentioned that these TCAS have been found to be genotoxic. In other countries (such as Germnay) this is mentuioned in the professionals information. to give you an example: I am sorry, it is in German, hope you can understand it. So i think genotoxity should be mentioned, breast cancer should be not mentioned. How do you think about this. Sorry, english is not my native language :). I hope you understood me nontheless :) Smaug77 —Preceding comment was added at 16:29, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Question
Do you have a diff to solidify your claim at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ananeuzumab that this was a definite attempt at hoaxing? I'm currently inclined to block the accounts and that could seal the deal... — Scientizzle 05:04, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
- Purportedly valid names for yet-nonexistent compounds? Indeed, I'd like to see that diff—which account's user page? Even if this was not a deliberate bad-faith attempt, it's as bad as one. Not cool. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 12:12, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
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- http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:BlakeCS&diff=next&oldid=97302782 Paul gene (talk) 00:28, 30 November 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Main page
Hey, welcome to Wikipedia! I reverted your comments to the article itself, could you put them on the talk page instead? Thanks much. Leave me a message on my talk page if you have any questions or want to discuss anything. Peace, delldot talk 14:55, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
No matter what your beef with the mainpage summary is, it is not appropriate to overwrite the article with your request. Keep it to talk pages only, and please note that you can and will be temporarily editblocked for disrupting Wikipedia if this continues. Thanks. Bearcat (talk) 14:57, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
I'm an admin, and all I needed was a couple of minutes to review the issue. Consider it done. Bearcat (talk) 15:09, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
- Hey, sorry I wasn't around but I left for work shortly after leaving that message. I'm glad it's all worked out, but please don't do anything of this sort again. It's a pretty blatant violation of WP:POINT. Best (and Happy Holidays yourself), Fvasconcellos (t·c) 18:53, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
[edit] Happy (Old) New Year!
[edit] Fluoxetine Page
"Dear Xris0,
Even before you restored your controversial paragraph in the Fluoxetine article, I had been reluctant to delete it. I had actually moved it to the Talk page, with the corresponding explanation (see Talk:Fluoxetine#Fluoxetine and suicidality). What you say does ring true to me; unfortunately, it is hard to come up with any solid evidence in favor of the paragraph you wrote. Let's work on this together. Having solid evidence will give your point more weight. And on the other hand, it is not good for the article to have a highly controversial opinion without attribution. Even as you originally wrote it, there is no support for it in the following paragraphs- see the diff- [3] Paul gene (talk) 01:42, 21 January 2008 (UTC)"
- Hi Paul, thanks for the message. I apologize for not putting in more details in the edit or putting in the citations, school is time consuming! I agree with what you wrote and I will try to find some citations. I just think it's pretty important to represent the non-pharmaceutical company viewpoint because, despite the fact that many demonizing them for the wrong reasons, there have been some great analyses by intelligent scientists that appear to reveal profound bias that would be great to get into the article with some good citations. If you are perchance interested in the authors outside of wiki and are not yet familiar with them, Dr. Breggin I think represents the extreme anti-pharmaceutical end of psychiatry, and Dr. Healy a good balance (despite I believe losing a job for being outspoken on this subject!). I think the journals have been giving both a them a hard time publishing on the subject, I'm guessing (perhaps wrongly) due to associations of the editorial boards, but despite this they have gotten material successfully published over the years (both peer reviewed journals and popular literature). Might be a couple weeks but I'll dig the citations up before re-instating the material we're talking about. Thanks for your efforts to clean up this article! --Xris0 (talk) 16:55, 30 January 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Videos
I hesitated to click on the video link. Didn't really want to see a film of floppy willies at this time in the morning (or any time for that matter). But it was really just a powerpoint slide.
My comment on MEDMOS wasn't whether some medical articles have had YouTube video links posted, but whether this was a major problem specific to medical articles. Those who spend their time refining our main policy/guildline pages don't like to see it repeated all over the place. That leads to inconsistencies when policies are tweaked. WP:EL should be cited to remove undesirable video links and such like, not WP:MEDMOS.
An example: some surgeon posts a video of a hip replacement op, or perhaps a video showing how some piece of equipment works. This could be quite an effective learning aid, and if copyright hasn't been infringed, may be OK. So for MEDMOS to say "no YouTube" is actually exceeding policy and the main guidelines. Colin°Talk 07:18, 3 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Nutrition and mental health
Why are you deleting any reference to the subject. There are unique and quality studies in each realm of mental disorders, however, you are removing them. Gnif global (talk) 12:38, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] MEDMOS
Please revert yourself. You are seeing problems where there are none. Colin°Talk 12:39, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
- But your objection on the first mention is a problem you have read into the guideline, rather than a problem with the guideline. WLU agrees. If you can accept that Tourette is unharmed by this guideline, please reconsider your objection. Nbauman is only one editor, and he seems to want a completely prescriptive guideline that even robots could adhere to. That isn't going to happen. Colin°Talk 13:17, 23 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] SVG and raster images
I've just noticed, your SVG image over at Image:Bupropion metabolism.svg appears to actually be just a raster image (specifically Image:Bupropion metabolism.png) that's been converted into XML using base64 encoding for the binary data. This may represent a misunderstanding on your part as to what the intention of a vector graphic format like SVG is for, or perhaps a misuse of whatever program it was that you used to convert that image. Normally when converting an image from raster to vector you'll need to get a program that can trace the lines (Inkscape is my personal favorite), though in a case like this one with chemical diagrams and text it'd probably be better to recreate it using more specialized tools. It's not very important in this case since the image isn't used anywhere, I just figured I'd drop a note in case you wanted to do more SVG conversions in the future. Bryan Derksen (talk) 19:45, 3 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Sertraline
I'll have a look :) Best, Fvasconcellos (t·c) 16:09, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, and there's more—it's just that I have a Thursday deadline and it is now... oh, look—freak-out time. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 00:42, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- No worries :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:24, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- Hey Paul. Question—the "Pharmacokinetics" section states "Its half-life in the body is 1345 hours". Is that supposed to be 13–45 hours? :) Anyway, I thought it was a narrower range. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 21:17, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- I hope so :) Any article heavy on technical content (in this case, pharmacology and trial results) will be on the low (high?) end of the readability scale, but I don't think it's inaccessible to the educated reader... It's certainly up there with bupropion, and I don't think that was a problem. I am so sorry for not providing any more comments yet, but I was hit hard by a sinus infection this week and am currently negotiating standing up and having a two-digit body temperature for the first time in three days. I have image requests backed up, articles I'd like to comment on—I will add the rest of my two cents, even if it's at FAC :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:01, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Did I do this? Sorry, I have no idea how that happened—Twinkle malfunction, perhaps? Anyway, I thought you'd like to know I'm just (a) waiting for Casliber's edits and (b) mulling over a few possible tweaks to the "Controversy" section before supporting. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 23:21, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
- I hope so :) Any article heavy on technical content (in this case, pharmacology and trial results) will be on the low (high?) end of the readability scale, but I don't think it's inaccessible to the educated reader... It's certainly up there with bupropion, and I don't think that was a problem. I am so sorry for not providing any more comments yet, but I was hit hard by a sinus infection this week and am currently negotiating standing up and having a two-digit body temperature for the first time in three days. I have image requests backed up, articles I'd like to comment on—I will add the rest of my two cents, even if it's at FAC :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:01, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
- Hey Paul. Question—the "Pharmacokinetics" section states "Its half-life in the body is 1345 hours". Is that supposed to be 13–45 hours? :) Anyway, I thought it was a narrower range. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 21:17, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- No worries :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 01:24, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
- Paul, how would you feel about the following line inserted in history? I am musing on striking a balance between setting some context, article size and too much irrelevant material, so...
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- Drugs with serotonin activity were initially researched in the 1970s with a view to treating hypertension, however, their antidepressant properties became apparent with the drug zimelidine.
this came from Healy p. 168. I am not too familiar with eary history of these drugs so is this accurate? I figured palcing this would help set some context without being onerously tangential. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:14, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
- The other thing would be a single sentence noting when the role of 5HT became prominent in theory of depression in the US, with a link to discussion elsewhere. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:16, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
- Sadly there is little in the Serotonin article to link to either (sigh) Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:17, 2 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] References on aspirin
Hi, you have removed several references from Aspirin as being false or not relevant in the way they are cited. I do wonder if on some of them, such as [1], the reference does in fact support the material - even if it is not mentioned in the abstract, the full text of the article may still have information that supports the sentence, could it not? Personally, I have not read the article in question, nor have I read several other of the articles you removed as citations, but do you think maybe one should be a little careful when removing such sourced information? I realize some people do do this, but I doubt that many editors would intentionally introduce sources that are not relevant to the material. I'm not saying you've done anything wrong; I'm just curious if you have double checked all of these references. CrazyChemGuy (talk) 00:05, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
I would have checked a full text if it were a well and competently written article. It is not. I checked, however, the full text for the reference you mentioned. And no, the full text does not support that nonsense. 103 out of 160 people had GI symptoms, not 160. In any case this study cannot be used to establish the frequency of GI symptoms that can be specifically attributed to aspirin. To do that it had to be randomized and, ideally, blinded. Second, using citations, which are at best tangential to the material they purport to prove, is a common phenomenon on WP. I would not guess what its causes are. To make everybody's life easier, the WP guidelines generally recommend that in the onus of finding a proof is on the person who inserts information into the article. Cheers, Paul Gene (talk) 00:24, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Possible cool project
I noticed your recent edits to Clinical depression regarding use of supplements for treatment. It seems like this section could get extremely long very quickly. Would you like to collaborate on an article proper for Supplemental treatment of clinical depression or something like that? I'm not particularly knowledgeable, but I have access to journals and know plenty about wiki-formatting and that sort of thing, plus I'm very interested in the topic.--Gimme danger (talk) 16:53, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Sertraline is a Featured article
(drum roll) Congratulations, Paul. Nice work as usual, and you got some fine editors to assist you ;) Best, Fvasconcellos (t·c) 22:34, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
| The WikiProject Neuroscience Award | ||
| Here's to Paul Gene for developing & redeveloping sertraline and bupropion thru FAC successfully.Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 23:49, 6 May 2008 (UTC) |
Thank you very much for the barnstar, and congrats on the FA! --Galaxiaad (talk) 04:15, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] OK what now?
What is next on your agenda? I had mused on working up chlorpromazine and clozapine and I know Fvasconcellos is also keen on the latter one...Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:57, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
- I am undecided. I was thinking about something small and historical like indalpine and zimelidine, or something popular like fluoxetine and citalopram, or something I would like to know more about like resveratrol, kava and selegiline. But if you or Fvasconcellos start working on something else, just let me know and I will help. Paul Gene (talk) 10:17, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Bullets or prose? The Wikipedia Manual of Style states that prose is the preferred style
Hi, I changed some bulleted lists in the treatments section of the Depression article to prose, following the Wikipedia:Manual of Style, which states that "Do not use lists if a passage reads easily using plain paragraphs." The Manual says that "Most Wikipedia articles should consist of prose, because prose allows the presentation of detail and clarification of context," while a list does not. "Prose flows, like one person speaking to another, and is best suited to articles, because their purpose is to explain." As well, when you take bulleted points and convert them to prose, you can indicate the importance, usage, or other comparisons for each example. You changed the section back to bullets, on the grounds that you like the bullets better. In this case, though, I argue it should be the widely accepted Wikipedia style conventions which we should follow, not any single editor's preferences. As well, this style issue goes beyond Wikipedia: look at Encyclopedia Britannica -- prose is the dominant way of presenting information in that reference.OnBeyondZebrax (talk) 20:54, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Aspirin
If you get a chance, please take another look at aspirin. I've checked out the references, and clarified the sentence on pancreatic cancer (the other experimental, cancer-related references checked out as agreeing with their cited material when I checked them). I am satisfied that the rest of the article meets the GA criteria, and plan to pass it in 48 hours unless other objections are raised. But I wanted to give you another chance to take a look, since you made some comments on it previously. Dr. Cash (talk) 16:32, 28 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Discuss everything
I agree with the principle, and that was exactly the reason for my edits. WhatamIdoing's contributions have not been discussed. Regards, Guido den Broeder (talk) 01:54, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
- They have, and he did changed his original version to reflect the comments by others. Read the Talk more closely.Paul Gene (talk) 01:58, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
- I have read the full talk, thanks. The change does not reflect the comments, except for his own. Guido den Broeder (talk) 02:03, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] SSRIs
Hi,
You went through SSRIs association with aggression and suicide, and I did the same just now. I'm very, very far from a specialist, could you have a go at reviewing my changes? One thing I did was replace quotes and numbers with more general statements, something covered by summary style guidelines I think. I replaced the specific percents covering aggression and suicidial ideation with a very bland 'it increases' - I couldn't find the specific figures in the FDA documents so I lacked the context to make it more specific. Since they were significant changes, they should definitely be on the page, but I'm always averse to p values and percents. Could you think of a better, but still generic way of including the information? F'rinstance, right now even though aggression rates seemed to be double suicide ideation, they're on the same playing field, but since there's no comparison to placebos that I could find, I can't do my preferred option (i.e. 2x versus placebo for suicide, 4x for aggression). I also dislike the prozac/suicide section - it's all about Germany, and it's sourced to unlinked court docs. Surely there are some pubmed documents that exist that cover this? Or even the New York Times? Court documents are probably considered primary sources or something close, and an external analysis would be nice.
Thanks for any help you can give me with this! WLU (talk) 15:09, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Sertraline lead
We write for the reader, Paul—whether a layperson or a pharmacologist, and the average Joe who knows nothing about the drugs he takes has just as much right to read the very best. Fluoxetine vs sertraline may be completely uncontroversial to you or to others familiar with the topic, but it clearly isn't to all—otherwise, why mention it anyway if it's common knowledge? :) No, WP:LEAD does not mandate references to everything, but it does for statements likely to be challenged. That one was more than likely to be challenged; it was challenged, and there is absolutely no harm in including a reference (sorry if I added the wrong one, though.) As for the "lazy bum" part, I'm sure I don't need to remind you of WP:AGF now, do I? Fvasconcellos (t·c) 18:51, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- By the way, Paul, I don't want it to seem like I'm stepping on your toes today, but... we do note this in the lead of other articles (cf. phenobarbital and metformin :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 20:05, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- ...and I've been thinking. WP:V trumps WP:LEAD, and if some editors are unhappy with referencing in the lead... we should accommodate such requests, as long as they're reasonable (e.g. nothing along the lines of "Sertraline is an antidepressant[citation needed]". Fvasconcellos (t·c) 00:51, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Fluoxetine
Hi. Can you explain your reason for reverting my last edit? Thanks. SP-KP (talk) 20:06, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, that bit is a trivia and does not add anything to the article. While one can argue that it should be mentioned somewhere, the lead is certainly not an appropriate place. I believe that putting fluoxetine into the category of WHO medications serves the purpose. Paul Gene (talk) 20:10, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- Hmm, imteresting. Do we have such a category? I do think it is worth mentioning, but that's just me... :) Fvasconcellos (t·c) 20:35, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
I take your point about placement. I put in the lead because one of the things a lead is supposed to do is highlight why something is regarded as notable, and the fact that the WHO regards fluoxetine as an "essential medicine" seems to me to confer a degree of notability on it. Would you be comfortable with the fact being mentioned somewhere less prominent? I'm uneasy about the idea of putting something in a non-trivial category without referencing its inclusion somewhere in the article. SP-KP (talk) 22:09, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- Why don't we bring this up at WT:PHARM? Maybe we could establish a guideline of sorts about drugs in the WHO Model List (e.g. where to mention it in the article, best way to categorize etc.) I have to say I don't share Paul's view on this as trivial—sorry, Paul—but I am not comfortable changing things around without wider input. Fvasconcellos (t·c) 23:37, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- The WHO list contains more than 500 medications and is primarily intended as a guidance/help for the authorities of developing countries. ("This WHO Essential Medicines Web Library is currently based on the 15th WHO Model List of Essential Medicines. It is primarily intended for national, hospital and institutional essential medicines selection committees. Use by prescribers or consumers is not recommended.") I do not see how it is worth mentioning except for in the WHO article. Paul Gene (talk) 00:51, 7 June 2008 (UTC)

