Talk:Paulette R. Brown

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[edit] Cleanup.

Hi, I'm the one that added additional tags on the article (WP:NPOV and WP:CU). The article has obviously had alot of work put into it, and the pics are great and helpful, but there are some huge improvements yet to be made. I'll give an example:

"...has worked in many areas of ministry has always had the spirit and a passion to serve; she loves assisting and supporting ministry and the body of Christ. There's no job too great or small that she would not do in support of the ministry of Jesus Christ."

• What notable areas of ministry in particular?
• Reads like a resume.
• Shows personal investment, rather than dry encyclopaedic tone.
• Biased writing style, needs to be from a Neutral Point of View.

This article needs to properly Cite Sources (properly in terms of format as well as the type of source.)

Feel free to contact me at my User Talk page. Nswinton 15:26, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

I'm back. I just did some serious cleanup work, mostly removing stuff the tags I added earlier mentioned. I clicked the reference link, and saw that the whole article was a copy+paste from Brown's bio page on some church org's website. While that's a good start for acquiring info, that's not a good way to write an encyclopedia article. I don't think there's any NPOV wording anymore, and I don't think there's any more grammar/sentence structure/typo stuff anymore, so I'm removing the cleanup and NPOV tags soon. I'm leaving the unreferenced tag because there's still unreferenced stuff here. This article needs to be expanded badly. Nswinton 00:24, 26 April 2007 (UTC)