Talk:Paul Curran (academic)

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I believe there may be a requirement for a slightly less subjective vocabulary used in this article especially the words "a period of rapid transformation involving a focus on academic strengths and investment in people, buildings, educational innovation and research." This reads as marketing speak. Would it not be better to used wording of "embarked on a programme of changes at Bournemouth University involving the modernisation of buildings and other learning resources, changes in staffing and a greater emphasis on research."? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 194.66.77.80 (talk) 14:25, 4 June 2008 (UTC)