Talk:Paul Bennewitz

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And has William Moore been heard of since? One would think he vanished after his Vegas appearance.

[edit] Cleanup tag

This article needs to be edited for POV and general readability.Lisapollison 08:43, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

[edit] ellipses

A good place to start the cleanup would be to remove the ellipses in the intro (or the whole article. I only got through the intro) They are wildly overused here and make it almost impossible to follow. I'll take a crack at it when I get time.Originalname37 19:41, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Still needs a lot of work, but I did get rid of the ellipses.Originalname37 20:16, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Citations & References

See Wikipedia:Footnotes for an explanation of how to generate footnotes using the <ref(erences/)> tags Nhl4hamilton (talk) 05:53, 6 February 2008 (UTC)