User talk:Pactiv Corporation

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Thank you for your interest. Could you provide additional guidance on what should be changed on the page? I would like to work to make this page acceptable to Wikipedia.

I referenced the guideline http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/WP:CORP when creating this page. The page was previously reviewed, (see trail below)

Pactiv is traded on the NYSE, and referenced in a similar way in many independent media outlets, including: --Wall Street Journal [1] --Morningstar [2] --Google Finance [3] --MarketWatch [4]

Your review and help is most appreciated. Pactiv Corporation 13:55, 26 April 2007 (UTC)

Hi Geoffry, I've removed the link to the website, thank you. I was updating a stub for Hefty bag, on behalf of the maker (Pactiv Corporation) as the former entry was not accurate. I did read the policies/guidelines for companies/brands and attempted to make it fairly generic and factual. Are there other changes needed?

Pactiv Corporation

Please do not add commercial links or links to your own private websites to Wikipedia, as you did in Hefty bag. Wikipedia is not a vehicle for advertising or a mere collection of external links. You are, however, encouraged to add content instead of links as long as the content abides by our policies and guidelines. See the welcome page if you would like to learn more about contributing to our encyclopedia. Thanks. Geoffrey Spear 15:10, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

You are free to add information about a product, but must abstain from commercial writing. Be as neutral as you can, and don't emphasize on company services. Also, please do not add "®" after the names of brands. If you would like to make suitable contributions I would suggest having a look on articles about other brands/companies. Thank you for your interest. --Húsönd 15:57, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

better ? Pactiv Corporation

Yes, it is much better now. Thank you.--Húsönd 16:40, 29 August 2006 (UTC)

Thank you both for your help. Pactiv Corporation