User talk:Owainjones2

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Hi again, Owain! I have jsut modified the two pages you created to try and make them more in the Wikipedia format for articles. I don't know anything about these topics, so I hope I have not distorted anything. One of the things that I did was remove your comments at the ends of the articles. Wikipedia articles should not include anything in first person. If you have anything to say about the article that is not part of the article, you can place it on the talk page, e.g. Talk:Animal geographies. The best place to mention your own contributions to the area is probably your user page: User:Owainjones2. JPD (talk) 15:20, 23 May 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Childhood

I will give you a little while to fix Otherness of childhood. Two problems:

  • What the <expletive deleted> has this to do with geography? It reads like pure sociology to me.
  • It also reads like original research. Try adding some links to works by people other than yourself!

-- RHaworth 21:01, 23 May 2006 (UTC) Hi I am a bit confused because I seem to have two talks going on on this article i here and one on the page itself. anyway I have tried to change it and hope it is more acceptable now