Talk:Outreau trial
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[edit] Can this page be cleaned up?
I don't have time right now but some of this text seems grammatically odd??! was it translated directly from French? Can someone try to fix it? --MBarry 05:02, 8 September 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Cleanup started
I've done quite a bit of work on this to make the English more idiomatic. In one or two places I had to use intelligent guesswork as to the exact meaning, especially in the case of the quote from the psychiatrist, so I haven't yet removed the cleanup tag - hopefully it can be checked by someone whose French is better than mine. Jon Rob 09:46, 30 November 2006 (UTC)
[edit] recent edits
I have changed some language to make the article more encyclopedic and NPOV. I have deleted an EL to a blog and added a reference. I fixed a grammatical error and deleted an unrelated link. ResearchEditor (talk) 02:10, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
