Talk:Nobody Sees

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[edit] GA nom on hold

  • "came at the same time as releasing the video to the internet on the official Universal Records website" Instead of just video it should be music video
  • "Despite positive critical response, the song failed to chart due to lack of radioplay and promotion of the song." could this be expanded a little bit, or merged?
  • "who previously had played for Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers, one of the inspirations of the album." should be "who previously had played for Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers, who was one of the inspirations of the album."
  • "The music video for "Nobody Sees" features the whole band of Powderfinger in shot at night-time" Maby change "whole" to "entire"
    • Y Done However, it seems like there should be a word between "in" and "shot" GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:20, 14 January 2008 (UTC)
That's it. Leave a note on my talk page when you are done. —Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 22:35, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
All Y Done. --rm 'w avu 08:21, 14 January 2008 (UTC)

Alrighty then, passed. —Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 01:56, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

I'm still concerned that the first sentence of the "Music video" section doesn't make sense because of a missing word. GaryColemanFan (talk) 02:04, 15 January 2008 (UTC)
Thanks Skeeter! And GCF, I've changed its wording, hopefully to your liking. It's a funny one to phrase, that whole sentence. --rm 'w avu 07:41, 15 January 2008 (UTC)