Talk:New England Association of Schools and Colleges

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[edit] POV and other problems

After a glance-over, I've tried to improve this article a little, mostly through trimming and a little rewording. I'd suggest it needs an overhaul though, and I'm not a good enough writer to do the task. As it stands now, the main problems that I can see:

• No source. Much, if not all of it, screams cut-and-paste from the NEASC's own materials.
• Has a (self) promotional tone that also lends me to suspect cut-and-paste-- too much fluffy jargon.
• Too long; too much information about the NEASC's various processes, etc.

Ripogenus77 21:59, 26 August 2006 (UTC)