Talk:Neosapien Commonwealth

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[edit] Background

IMO this section needs to be rewritten in according to Wikipedia manual of style, because right now it's incoherent and reads like multiple little pieces of information cluttered together. The content is OK, it's just the form that bothers me a lot. --Koveras  16:09, 7 July 2007 (UTC)

  • Once I am done with the series, will begin to reorganize the article if thats ok. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mondas (talkcontribs)
    • OK, no problem at all. :) While you are on it, can you please record the episode numbers where particular infos come from? That'd make the article look much more solid... --Koveras  04:47, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
      • Ok will do, though just a note that the thing won't be 100% complete as I think I can only watch till episode 25 and thus not the entire series but will add episode references. Just one thing I need help in is how do I do episode tags? Should I put (episode: *insert name and link) or do a tag thing with [ *insert name of episode* ]? --Mondas  13:47, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
        • The best way would be to use inline citations, I think: <ref name="epXX">''Exosquad'', episode XX.</ref>, where "XX" is the number of episode. For citations to appear properly, as soon as you add one, add a new section named "References" just above "External links" with the following content: "{{refs|2}}" (without quotation marks). That ought to format all the references nicely. :) --Koveras  05:51, 11 July 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Phaeton

The reason I first moved Phaeton to a section of his own rather than a subsection of Military was because I've got an impression that as the living banner of the Neosapien regime, he controlled both its military and its civilian sides. I therefore request him moved to a separate top-level section again. ^^ --Koveras  09:25, 13 August 2007 (UTC)