Talk:Nathan M. Pusey
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[edit] Elementary School
I'm relatively new, but several things seem off about the content on the elementary school.
- It very much reads as an ad; at the very least I'm proposing editing it heavily on that front. (Reading it again I missed "...offers the following programs to meet the needs of our students..." [my emph] that seems to indicate it's either copied from the school site or written by an insider, either case is frowned on.)
- The change of topic is jarring as it's written, I think I'll either soften that or possibly just section it.
- Should it be in this article? I see no mention of Pusey having any connection to it other than it being named after him, in the manner that many public schools are named after someone who can't object anymore...
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- Should it be in any article? That is, if not here, I'm not sure it's actually notable. Provided Pusey himself had no hand in shaping practices there, I argue it's not notable; there are thousands of schools with outwardly similar programs, if Pusey is somehow noteworthy beyond this, citation of that note is needed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Hatchetfish (talk • contribs) 11:14, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
