Talk:Mt Pangasugan

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[edit] Confusing paragraph

"A study by Visayas State University (VSU) in Baybay City, Leyte [1] found many
animal species listed by the World Conservation Union in the Red List of
Threatened Animals (IUCN Red List). Species include: the Philippine tarsier,
Philippine flying fox, Fischer’s pygmy fruit bat, eagle-owl, Philippine
hawk-eagle, Rufous Lord kingfisher, Philippine leafbird and miniature
tit-babbler and flying lemur."

I'm actually confused by this paragraph. Supposedly, this article is about the mountain and, taking a cue from the header, is supposed to be about the mountain, but after reading and re-reading it, I wasn't clear if all these animal species were endemic to this mountain. In other words, it wasn't established clear enough.

For this reason, I've tagged it for clean-up. Can additional/better references be incorporated on this article? Or, can this one be rewritten to better state what was intended to be meant here? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Titopao (talk • contribs) 00:42, 28 September 2007 (UTC)