Talk:Mociology

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I didn't tag the article, but it is a big chunk of text. Maybe it needs to be cut into sections? Communisthamster 19:31, 12 January 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Mociology Cleanup

I have made substantial changes to this article for several reasons. First, this article was just a bulk of information that was not sorted in any particular order nor did it have any headings to guide the reader. Second, I split the article up into four main sections: the introduction, inception, early examples, and mociology adoption. These were the form main sections I found to be both relevant and consistent with the bulk of information that was present. Third, I deleted a lot of information that was not relevant to the "mociology" article. For instance, there was information about the lecture in which the term mociology was coined as well as information pertaining to the related term "mocio-economics." While these terms are relevant in their own respect, they are not consistent with the article on "mociology" itself, which is why they were deleted from the article. Other than minor gramatical errors, those were the main changes I saw. Additional comments would be helpful. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Jbwilson333 (talk • contribs) 06:23, 7 May 2007 (UTC).