Talk:Mobile, Alabama/Comments

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[edit] Mobile, Alabama assessment

I originally graded it as start class. My intent was to make it a "B" class. In fact, I thought I did. Of course, it cannot be GA because it hasn't, I don't think, passed through the GA process before.

• There are one or two typo's which need to be fixed (I will get them soon) and there are a couple of areas that need some expansion.
• The transportation section should include the cruise line which is in place and will likely expand this summer. I would like to see something about the two tunnels and perhaps the Africatown bridge which are all three critical arteries.
• Under Education we probably should add Faulkner University which operates in Mobile too. I'm personally conflicted about how much detail we should include about education. The public school system is struggling as are many metropolitan systems.
• Economy could be expanded too and needs attribution.
• What I do not see are violations of WP:NPOV, WP:NOR or WP:COPY. The material is well written, diverse and balanced.

I think with the above things in mind the article would be ready for GA review and then FA soon afterwards. As for the rating, I will change it right away. That was an error. JBEvans 01:14, 14 April 2007 (UTC) (crossposted from USER TALK:Blaxthos)

I agree with the revised assessment, including your comments regarding deficiencies. Thanks for taking the time to explain.  :-) /Blaxthos 02:51, 14 April 2007 (UTC)