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[edit] FASD

Thanks for your good work on the Fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder page. Nunquam Dormio 19:36, 12 February 2007 (UTC)

A problem has been raised on the FASD talk page. The article might be under the wrong name, with the page fetal alcohol syndrome now being a copy of the content of the fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder page. TimVickers 16:37, 13 March 2007 (UTC)

[edit] A note of encouragement

Hi, ML. I've been intending to respond to your post on Talk:Fetal alcohol syndrome all week, but kept getting stalled by other work and my desire to put together a cogent, encouraging, thorough and well-composed note to you (as you deserve :-). If I keep waiting for the well-composed part, it will never happen <grin>, so I'll put my thoughts out in no particular order, and apologize in advance for the chaotic writing.

You've done spectacular work and are verging on featured article status, but the final tweaking is always the killer. I had hoped more people would come forward to help, but it looks like, as relates to content, you're the expert :-) I had a similar situation when I wrote Tourette syndrome; I found no one else on Wiki who could help, so I took whatever bits and pieces of advice I could get from anyone who would give it. Someone reminded me, then, not to worry about the vagaries of writing in Wiki-style; just to get the content nailed down, because I knew the content and others could fix the "other" Wiki stuff.

So I'm here to tell you the same. Don't get hung up on the parts of Wiki WP:MOS you might not know (although you'll learn it as you go); others (like me) can fix footnotes and Manual of Style issues all day long, but can't write the content. Others can even fine tune the copyediting as you get closer to featured status (but if you can, while you're writing further, try to minimize the e.g., i.e., and etc. :-) You clearly know the material through and through, so don't be sidetracked from the writing.

As you get further along, I suggest the following order to optimize your efforts: 1) finish this business of sorting out FAS from FASD; 2) submit the article to a new peer review (which usually takes at least a month); 3) after completing items that come up on peer review, post to the Medical groups asking for further review; 4) then ask TimVickers or another good medical copyeditor to run through it; 5) then approach WP:FAC. I had to keep hounding people to get extra eyes on the TS article.

I've been frustrated that the work to get the separation between the two articles was stalled, so I just went and did it. That doesn't mean anything is set in stone; I just wanted to get the ball rolling. I hope it hasn't left you too frustrated.

If you "struggle with the basic conceptualization of FAS as it relates to FASD", imagine those of us who don't know the material as thoroughly as you do :-) I suspect that you know so much on the topic that it's hard for you to step back and conceptualize how much the rest of us might not know. (At least, that's what happened to me with TS, and I just kept getting more and more eyes to look at the article, so I could see where things that were completely clear to me weren't clear to previously uninvolved readers.) Your task is to lead the mildly-educated through the minefield. Try to write for the "rest of us" who don't have it all sorted out as well as you do.

There is some separation needed between FAS and FASD, but it's not as clear to me as it may be to someone with your level of knowledge. I'm not sure if the diabetes analogy is a good one, as both seem to be recognized medical conditions, while FASD is in some nebulous definition territory, which isn't that clear to me. You've got to make it clearer to the average reader. The FAS article has to tell us how the condition is currently defined according to what diagnostic system, and then branch into everything else. FASD isn't a recognized medical condition, but I don't know why, I don't know exactly and succintly what is in the diagnosis of FAS, etc. The article is trying to combine multiple conditions and four different diagnostic systems, so the average dummy is lost.

Maybe you can put together a navigational template similar to {{Diabetes}} to help the average reader with the terminology and interrelationships and all those acronyms. I'm not clear on the four diagnostic systems, what is "official" and what is still seeking medical consensus, why the controversy, and so on, but there needs to be a basic article that says, "here's what is current consensus" before moving in to the lesser-defined realm of FASD. You're correct that you might be able to sort some of that out by utilizing summary style to branch some of your content that might be common to both articles. For example, is Treatment the same whether the condition is labeled FAS or FASD? If so, you could write a Treatment article, and link it to both, or include it in your navigational template. These are just ideas; as you said, it may help to have "summaries and supporting articles on the diagnostic systems, outcomes, and treatment". All tied together by a navigational template. (I don't like the vertical navigational templates like diabetes; I did {{Topics related to Tourette syndrome}}.

I do have a sense you're trying to pack too much info — a lifetime of knowledge — into one article, so focusing on summary style may help resolve a lot. But, as a semi-knowledgeable layperson, the status of FAS vs. FASD still isn't clear to me. Lay out clearly what is in the accepted diagnosis of FAS before telling us about FASD, and then tell us the consensus/acceptance status on FASD, and why it's not fully accepted or if it's controversial and why. Spend some time considering article (parent and daughter) structure, and then the dummies like me can help you put that structure and navigational template in place, while you write.

I'm here to help however I can; again, I hope my bold changes to the articles didn't scare you off. You really are off to a great start, and remember, you can't break Wiki, so don't worry too much :-) Best regards, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 03:02, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

¡Que disfrutes de España!, and ping me whenever you need input or help (I'll vandal watch in your absence). Best, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 13:37, 14 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Reactive attachment disorder

Hi. I've nominated this article for FA. I'm hunting for knowledgeable people to review it and you look just the ticket. I'd be awfully obliged if you would take the trouble to look it over. Thanks. Fainites barley 21:37, 18 February 2008 (UTC)